Monday, April 03, 2006

introspection

Have you ever sat in a room full of people chattering away to you and others, and just for a moment experienced emptiness followed by a gush of thoughts completely different ?
I have.
I told Sarah just today that i've never written a poem in my life.
I don't know whether to call it a poem, but this is just something I wrote during my 10th grade, when I was seated in a never-ending chemistry class. I think that chemistry class happened to be right after a wonderful 40 minutes of studying Julius Caesar. So obviously, I was inspired. lol.


It's so quiet around
as the noise plugs my ears,
it's so dark around
as the array of colours veils my eyes,
it's strange how the being is capable
of isolating and blocking out.
Even as i am bound to my seat,
there's no leash on my mind.

25 comments:

jo said...

That was a real gud one jan.. keep it up *thumbs up*...
u shd do more of such poetic stuff n all.. m serious *no jokes*....
neways keep it up..
luv yaa...
mwahhh...

Jan said...

poetic stuff? haha. sure, i'll try. For that i need to be either extremely bored (which i am most of the time) or i have to be in the strange mood that makes me write like this or i should probably attend a boring chemistry class once in a while :D.
neway, thnx hun *smiles*.
cheers
muahh

Cuckud said...

jan now ur freakin me out...hehe but its ok it waz in 10th yea... well u hav gotten to b more dumb after 10th...so its all gud..yayz...lappy..missed u in skool today...:P fine fine..ok stop...but dat waz gud...

Anonymous said...

'EVERY CLOUD HAS A SILVER LINING'
NO MATTER HOW DARK IT GETS!
I KNOW THAT YOU HAVE IT IN YOU
TO SEE IT THROUGH!
KEEP TRYING!KEEP SHINING!KEEP SMILING!...MY VERY BEST WISHES ARE ALWAYS WITH YOU!!..ya poetic stuff-it is the best way to express yourself....!keep it up!....signing off this is anonymous....!!!keep guessing!!!

Anonymous said...

mmm...jan...HERE'S RAISING A TOAST TO YOUR SUCCESS THAT'S SO WELL DESERVED!CONGRATS!...this is esp.in relation to the surprise to cuckud on her b'day...

Anonymous said...

ok...and back to the days sorry for not keeping youll up 2 date!!
3rd-
find a rainbow day
chocolate mousse day
circus day
workplace napping day!
and....
4th
tell a lie day
vitamin c day.....guess that's enough for now!!c ull soon!!!!keep enjoying till then....have fun!

Jan said...

:S uhh..thanks for everythin u said and the days update :D...but who r u??
really, i'm in no mood to guess now..anyone else??

oh n BTW..did anyone not understand what i wrote??

Sarah said...

Awesome stuff girl..
Dun ever stop being bored in Chemistry class..lolz..PJ!!
hehe..*non stop laughter*
NO sense is coming frm my head rite now...
cya..
mwwahhz

Jan said...

hey..i ws thinkin..anonymous..are u james by any chance?? :S

Cuckud said...

believe me jan it caantt b james...he waz pretty pissed bout da whole not includin him in da surprise thin...so yea...nowayzz.

Anonymous said...

it coul'd have been a clover leaf...or maybe my lucky penny!was it a special star?or maybe the horseshoe.....dunno what it was...but i feel so lucky 2 have friends like youll!!!!"happy lady luck day!"

Jan said...

:S
ok..i give up!

Anonymous said...

ok WOW...i dont kno how u manged to put so much feeling and truth in just 8 lines...honestly jan...its beutiful...bcoz its full of meaning n sadness...but most of all coz uve put it down so well...u guys can really piss me off...u have so much talent n u cant feakin rite SOMETHIN once in a while...learn from me... i keep boring pple wid my poems...sheesh...females!!mwhaz...tc

Jan said...

yayzz...thanks gailie!:)
Finally, SOMEONE appreciates my talent!!
i wish indra menon had learnt to do that. hmph. :|

jo said...

hehe.. lol.. u tink indira will???

Anonymous said...

hey buddy!it's me poppin' up on caramel popcorn day....to wish you a day caramelised with fun!!!!

jo said...

mr or miss anonymous... who r u.. is it manisha in any case.. in two minds rite now...jyoti

Anonymous said...

is anonymous sum teacher or sumtin :S
maybe indira máam or anjali ..pakka ..lolll... i think so...

tc
Mohit
bye
Mohit
c u
Mohit

Anonymous said...

7th-
coffee cakes just for you'll...
on coffee cake day,
2 wish you'll a mouth watering treat!!!

as it is let someone else clean day too...i thought of letting you'll do all my....sweeping and swabbing..brooming and brushing...so how do you feel about taking up the job???


hey sport...relax!!
i just wanted to bug you'll a little!

well it's world health day too ....

Anonymous said...

A teacher is....
an Encouragement...
an Inspiration...
a support...
and a friend....
and if you'll feel i have these qualities in me ... ?????????
i don't have words to say........hehe!

Anonymous said...

on the 8th i just would wish you'll a blessed buddha day!...

Anonymous said...

lol...indra?? dat sweetheart still her usual sweet caring self i can see...cmon gurl...u dont need me to tell u got talent...dat was BRILLIANT...n thanks for commenting...ur a sweetheart!!

Anonymous said...

wow...u made me feel spl...thank you!!!!

Jan said...

wat d hell is goin on??!!!
my blog is not MY blog anymore! :|
2 days my internet does'nt work and..LOL!!
manisha hun..u even accepted dat u r anonymous!! haha..get over it!! sign in wid ur name already!!
haha
n gail..i din get a word u said :$.

Anonymous said...

lol...u didnt....oops...i was being sarcastic hun...bout indra...n sayin how u write really well...dere!! comprehensible now?lolz...mwah...cya